Revenge and Replacement 8. The very beginning of Season 1 had no plot at all. It was much easier to keep an eye on them with so few people, and he had managed to give them amiable enough personalities so that fights rarely broke out and if they did, they ended in good-natured smiles. Eheheh it’s over friends! Mistakes Were Made 9. Somewhere deep down, Mianite would always care for his wayward brother and if Dianite was ever allowed to leave his Nether-Prison then he would see that. A story of how the gods of Mianite came to be. The First Battle Filler 5.
Dianite’s Sorrow and The Big Reveal 7. When he arrived he was shocked to find the rotting corpses of his gifts to Dianite waiting for him. It was a surprise to see that Dianite seemed to accept his new setup, rather than openly hate it. Even his skin seemed to have taken on a darker red tone since Mianite had last seen him. He conjured his earlier creations and left them for his brother. Mianite paid a visit to his brother, wishing to see if perhaps he could be freed from his realm finally. The author would like to thank you for your continued support.
When Sonja joined, she followed Mianite as well and became one of the four main heroes. Story Story Writer Forum Community.
Anything you think I could have done better? Also, I like the idea of Nadeshot being an undead like Tom too, and that’s why his skin doesn’t show his face and also why he’s on Team Dianite.
Next was a gift for his sister, if she ever decided to return to his realm. Dianite’s Sorrow and The Big Reveal 7. The very beginning of Season 1 had no plot at all. You took your sweet time in coming back, though, and I don’t think they appreciated that. They were later joined by James Waglington in Season 2.
The scene before him was touching, but it was missing something. Get Known if you don’t have an account.
She was absent for a time, but her existence was proved when Mianite sent the Heroes on a quest to retrieve her stolen heart from Dianite. And if you really like my god-awful writing for some reason, don’t fret! He put all of them, except Dianite’s people, on different points in the land and let them find each other.
The next was a rather short female, with long, chestnut-brown brown hair and bright green eyes. Months had passed since the war between siblings, and Dianite had long since been banished to the Nether. But none of them knew the story of their Gods, of how they came to be.
Despite what you have heard about me, it is in my interest to see Dianite revived. So he delved deeper into his memory of happier times and continued to create. Can’t we have single conversation without barbed comments?
The First Battle Filler 5. However, it quickly became clear that Mianite runs a much tighter ship in seaon realm than the other, and his followers are less than accepting of those who follow other gods.
Nearly a year passed as Mianite watched his tiny community grow and prosper. At first the plot consisted of saving the seaskn of Dagrun from the approaching Taint. Any and all tips, comments, etc are greatly appreciated and will be put towards making an even better series next time around. D How do you guys think I did with my first multi-chapter fic, and just one of my first fics in general?
While this is the Finale, I do plan on having an epilogue posted soon, to explain a few things I wanted to add in, but didn’t think should happen before the events of the actual jeticho. A story of how the gods of Mianite came to be.
It was a surprise to see that Dianite seemed to accept his new setup, rather than openly hate it. He conjured his earlier creations and left them for his brother. He had refrained from creating any more people for days, his sisters misgivings weighing down on his mind.
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Mistakes Were Made 9. Tucker chose to follow Mianite, and Tom was recruited by Dianite. A peaceful man with a wise face and passive personality.
Dianite’s powers had grown again. With a flash of light, both men were once more alive, and to Mianite’s surprise he could see intelligence spark back into their newly formed eyes. Revenge and Replacement 8.
And, I’ll let you guys in on a little secret; I miiiight be planning another Finsle series that will be several chapters long, and Qwerty miiiight know a little something about that.
A stylish man with jet black hair and red-rimmed glasses. Before he could think of a passive response, the redhead spoke up again. Dianite’s nonchalant tone disturbed Mianite, but he refused to be baited by his brothers hidden taunts.
It was much easier to keep an eye on them with so few people, and he had managed to give them amiable enough personalities so that fights rarely broke out and if they did, they ended in good-natured smiles. With Dianite in exile and Ianite’s sudden change of heart, Mianite was left all alone on his island. When he arrived he was shocked to find the rotting corpses of his gifts to Dianite waiting for him. He couldn’t bring himself to only give her one, so next followed a pair finals rough-n-tough siblings with identical tastes for adventure.
She reminded him of his fox-colored cat long ago, final so he gifted her with a hoodie of the animal. Letting them decide things for themselves and figure out how they would live was a refreshing sight after the hardships Mianite had endured recently. A third god, the neutral Ianite, was created by Jordan when he refused to choose one of the two original gods.